I've started editing my book before it goes to my betas. I didn't like the beginning and the end of the story, so I've changed them twice. In Eye of the Throne, our explorers brought some crystals from the deadly mountain back to Arret. A spirit of old awakens and conflict arises between Nathan and Gothur. Will Nathan stay if his parents leave? How about his girl, Shirley? Will she stay or leave with her father. So many choices.